There won't be much dialogue through out this opening because we don't know how good our actors are and we want to leave question and mystery as to what is going on into the scene therefore only short dialogue. When they're walking they can talk and have a normal conversation (not scripted) and we'll put music over the dialogue and put the credits in that section starting beforehand in establishing shots of the fields.
Example:
Keiron: Let's go through here
(He sneaks through the opening in the woods)
Louise: Okay
Its only short amounts of dialogue but because we want it to seem realistic we will allow what feels natural although along the guidelines of the script.
(They walk through into the house area, Louise goes through the first door and Keiron goes around the side with a plan to make her jump)
Louise: This place is weird, why are we here? (No reply) Keiron? Where are you? (Starts to feel scared when she hears strange noises) Keiron?
Keiron: (Jumps out and scares her) RAWR!
Louise: (Jumps) Ahh you're so annoying! Why did you do that?!
Keiron: I'm sorry I couldn't help myself (Hugs her) Ok now, seriously close your eyes.
Louise: Why?
Keiron: Just do it.
Louise: Fine (Closes eyes and Keiron runs off again)
(Louise stands and waits but the weird noises come back but Keiron does not, she opens her eyes)
Louise: Ok, this isn't funny, cut it out!... Keiron come back... please?
(Strange silhouette creature comes out and stands in front of her, she screams and there is a blackout)
(She wakes up on the floor with writing of satanic symbols down her face, arms and hands).
Example:
Keiron: Let's go through here
(He sneaks through the opening in the woods)
Louise: Okay
Its only short amounts of dialogue but because we want it to seem realistic we will allow what feels natural although along the guidelines of the script.
(They walk through into the house area, Louise goes through the first door and Keiron goes around the side with a plan to make her jump)
Louise: This place is weird, why are we here? (No reply) Keiron? Where are you? (Starts to feel scared when she hears strange noises) Keiron?
Keiron: (Jumps out and scares her) RAWR!
Louise: (Jumps) Ahh you're so annoying! Why did you do that?!
Keiron: I'm sorry I couldn't help myself (Hugs her) Ok now, seriously close your eyes.
Louise: Why?
Keiron: Just do it.
Louise: Fine (Closes eyes and Keiron runs off again)
(Louise stands and waits but the weird noises come back but Keiron does not, she opens her eyes)
Louise: Ok, this isn't funny, cut it out!... Keiron come back... please?
(Strange silhouette creature comes out and stands in front of her, she screams and there is a blackout)
(She wakes up on the floor with writing of satanic symbols down her face, arms and hands).
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